Frank, I like what you're doing and what Marnie pointed out reads
well,but the edge to edge
sharpness and the number of well , um, items that are kinda on the same
plain make it a tad
too cluttred I think... a bit too much going on, perhaps..
Don't know if I tighter crop would help...
ann
[email protected] wrote:
In a message dated 11/9/2009 6:38:23 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
[email protected] writes:
From: frank theriault <[email protected]>
Subject: PESO - Chilly Day at the Moonbeam Cafe
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
Date: Monday, November 9, 2009, 4:32 PM
My feelings about this one have been
vacillating: Sometimes I like,
sometimes not so much.
I usually (I think) prefer simpler compositions, but this
one is
anything but. Since I'm in a "I think I like it now"
place, I'll post
and see what others think:
http://knarfinthecity.blogspot.com/2009/11/cool-day-at-moonbeam-cafe.html
Hope you enjoy. Comments welcome.
cheers,
frank
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I like it. The phone's got a coffee, she's got a coffee.
Or chilly day, someone left the remains of their coffee after a phone call.
Doesn't HAVE to mean something, but seems to. Other than that it's a nice
juxtaposition, well composed, and well, sharp.
Marnie aka Doe :-)
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