Dan, As Bob and Ken and others have commented, breathing room on the left would be good. You could loose most of the right side of the frame and the bottom 25% and still have some good leading lines from that fence. Phtographing existing structures is a challenge, especially with their surroundings. The green lawn and fence make a pleasant setting for the building. Regards, Bob S.
On Sun, Nov 22, 2009 at 3:12 AM, Bob W <[email protected]> wrote: >> I have be photographing some of our local landmarks. I have >> been trying to vary the images from the usual head on shot of >> the buildings. This one has been a bit difficult for me, >> because of the surroundings. I tried to use the fence across >> the street as a visual lead-in, but I'm not sure whether I >> like this one or not/ >> >> Comments, criticisms and suggestions welcome. >> >> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=10226822 >> > > The building could do with a bit of breathing room on the left of the frame > - it's a bit cramped as it is. Maybe a slightly lower viewpoint too. > > Bob > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
