Thanks Godders! That draft actually doesn't have much attention paid to the end--I only paired the photos, but didn't sort the pages.
I'm leaning towards a slightly smaller amount of pictures. I also will most probably put out to versions of the same book, in different sizes. We'll how it looks. I might post another draft here soon. Thanks for the feedback, j On Sun, Nov 29, 2009 at 1:41 PM, Godfrey DiGiorgi <[email protected]> wrote: > On Thu, Nov 26, 2009 at 2:03 PM, Juan Buhler <[email protected]> wrote: >> Coming out of my usual lurkerdom to ask for feedback, as usual :) I'm >> working on a new book of my photos. Trying to make something a bit >> more extensive than the previous books, and to use a bit of a less >> conservative layout. Anyone care to look at a low res pdf and say what >> they think? >> >> The pdf, a quick export from Blurb, can be downloaded here: >> >> http://www.box.net/shared/x02tc2knjn >> ... > > Heya Juan, > > I've wandered through the proof several times now. I think I see what > you're saying about how it gets a little fractured towards the end, > but overall it's looking good already! I don't know that I can offer > all that much editing help ... nothing stands out as "wrong", most of > your choices are congruent and supportive. > > 7x7 inch seems a bit tight for some of these photos. 9x9 would be my > preference as a minimum ... unless the detailing on 7x7 is very good, > I think it might rob the photos of some of its impact. I'm not sure > what the options are for blurb however. > > Inspiring work. I forwarded your note and a link to your "Water > Molotov" blog to a friend of mine. He's enjoying the heck out of them. > -- > Godfrey > Â godfreydigiorgi.posterous.com > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- Juan Buhler - http://www.jbuhler.com -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

