On Dec 15, 2009, at 6:47 AM, Jack Davis wrote:
I do like this better. My crop suggestion was vague, but I was
thinking of considerably less crop to the bottom. Doing so would
allow more wake to show and restore it to a vertical frame. Also,
while I'm sure it would be of no consequence to many, doing so would
take the horizon out of the center.
I didn't comment earlier because pretty much everything I was going to
say had been said. I love the first shot, but my gut feels that it is
cropped wrong.
I think that I agree with Jack, to crop the sky, probably between the
tops of the towers near the little wisp of cloud at 2 O'Clock, just
above and to the right of the towers. That'll move horizon up to the
2/3 part of the frame. The water is interesting, there's a lot going
on in it. The dark bit at that bottom also sort of frames the picture.
Jack
--- On Tue, 12/15/09, Subash <[email protected]> wrote:
From: Subash <[email protected]>
Subject: PESO: Grossmünster-2
To: "PDML" <[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, December 15, 2009, 5:56 AM
On Mon, 14 Dec 2009 20:17:55 -0800
(PST)
Jack Davis <[email protected]>
wrote:
While clean and simple, it feels sort of empty. I'd
crop the sky
quite a bit and the water some. Should allow the
elements to present
themselves a little more effectively. Love the canoe.
Jack, i have made a (rather heavy) crop of the original
keeping your
suggestion in mind.
http://picasaweb.google.co.in/pdml.live/Peso#5415458892034949586
do tell me what you think.
regards, subash
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