On Sat, Feb 6, 2010 at 11:54 PM, paul stenquist <[email protected]> wrote: > I like the elimination of the one sliver of grass to the right, but I'd leave > the little grouping of greenery near the base of the plant. But both are > excellent. > Paul
Agree. Dave > > > On Feb 6, 2010, at 11:45 PM, Bruce Dayton wrote: > >> Hello Jack, >> >> Thanks for the comments. I have tried another rendering based on >> your feedback. I'm not sure if this is what you meant, but here it >> is: >> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd20_1531_1-1.htm >> >> Original: >> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd20_1531-1.htm >> >> -- >> Best regards, >> Bruce >> >> >> Saturday, February 6, 2010, 8:14:48 PM, you wrote: >> >> JD> That's exquisite, Bruce! The terrific soft background is perfect >> JD> support for the crisp edgy plant. The sharper detailed blade and >> JD> other lower edge plant seems out of context to me. Believe I'd >> JD> like the cleaner simpler look if they were not present. >> JD> Because I think so highly of this image, I feel it's worth >> JD> considering cropping the edge just enough to allow a slight >> JD> straitening of the featured plant. >> >> JD> Jack >> >> >> >> JD> --- On Sat, 2/6/10, Bruce Dayton <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>>> From: Bruce Dayton <[email protected]> >>>> Subject: PESO - Sentinal >>>> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> >>>> Date: Saturday, February 6, 2010, 6:58 PM >>>> Got back from a photo outing with all >>>> of my kids. It was fun as each >>>> had a camera and took photos. 4 DSLR's and an uber >>>> zoom cam. >>>> >>>> I spent most of my time working with my 2nd daughter >>>> learning how to >>>> use an incident meter and manual modes. She also >>>> worked with the two >>>> soft focus lenses (85mm and 28mm). Hopefully I can >>>> have her post a >>>> shot for all to see. >>>> >>>> Here is one that I took: >>>> >>>> Pentax K20D, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6 >>>> ISO 800, 1/400 sec @ f/5.6, Handheld >>>> >>>> >>>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd20_1531-1.htm >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Best regards, >>>> Bruce >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>>> [email protected] >>>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link >>>> directly above and follow the directions. >>>> >> >> >> JD> >> >> >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- Documenting Life in Rural Ontario. www.caughtinmotion.com http://brooksinthecountry.blogspot.com/ York Region, Ontario, Canada -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
