Brian -
I think the color shots all work... - that is, none of them are any "better" than the others - judt different. I"d have wanted the figure to be less , um, posed looking - I bet she knew you were taking her photo... Love the golden light glow and such a great sky. I don't think the black and white works.... that thin white line (halo) around the girl is distracting, looks like you cut and pasted her in.

ann


Brian Walters wrote:

G'day all

On my recent trip to the north coast of New South Wales, I came across
this track leading up to a coastal headland.  I thought it would make an
interesting image in the right light but I also thought it would be more
interesting with someone walking along the track.

Not having anyone handy to use as a model, I sat down beside the track,
pre-focused on an appropriate point and waited....

After 15-20 minutes, this very attractive young lady walked by.  She
said "Hello".  I said "G'day".  She walked up the track and I grabbed
this image.

Here's several crops - I'm tending towards Crop 3 but it loses the patch
of ocean on the left which, although small, gives the other crops a bit
of context.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1370864/NSW-Qld_May_2010/index.html


What say you?  Any other suggestions?  The uncropped version is No:1 and
the final image is a quick and dirty B&W conversion to see if there's
any potential there.



Cheers

Brian

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Brian Walters
Western Sydney Australia
http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/





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