Brian Walters wrote:

On Wed, 28 Jul 2010 20:33 -0700, "Jerry in Arizona"
<[email protected]> wrote:
A few days I submitted a pic of an Arizona monsoon sky and got some nice comments, but it was suggested that showing some ground would improve the image. Well the sky gods cooperated again this evening and I took a few with a wider lens and included some ground clutter. The building on the lower left is the same one as in the previous pic. Thus I submit this humble effort for your review and consideration.


http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac164/gelewis_2010/MonsoonSky3_PESO_I5811.jpg

I think that's a much better balanced composition than the previous one
and I even like this sky more.

I agree with Bruce that a bit more contrast would help (not sure why Ann
can't see the building...)

Cheers

Brian
Ok after staring at it for a while I can see an odd shape on the lower righthand side in silhouette...just to the left of the tiny signature. But I can't see the detail... maybe I need that catarac surgery sooner than I thought I would (only half kidding)

I couldn't see it at all last night.
ann





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