On Wed, 15 Sep 2010 15:08 -0700, "Jack Davis" <[email protected]> wrote: > Afternoon, Brian! > Doesn't really work for me, Brian. Sorry! No surrounding drama and what > appears to be very shallow and perhaps a little muddy "sea." > Reflection if fine and your composition, right on. > Technically well done.
Thanks, Jack. I think that 'reflects' my view as well. I agree that the sea (which was indeed shallow - I was standing in it!) looks muddy and it wasn't in reality, so a bit more work might be worthwhile to improve that. Cheers Brian ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Brian Walters Western Sydney Australia http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/ > > --- On Wed, 9/15/10, Brian Walters <[email protected]> wrote: > > > From: Brian Walters <[email protected]> > > Subject: PESO - Sea and Sky > > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > > Date: Wednesday, September 15, 2010, 2:38 PM > > 'Morning all > > > > I really want to like this photo but I'm not sure it quite > > works - maybe > > the cloud reflections are too 'busy'. > > > > Comments? Suggestions? All gladly received. > > > > > > http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1370864/PESO/slides/IMGP8411peso.html > > > > > > Cheers > > > > Brian > > -- -- http://www.fastmail.fm - mmm... Fastmail... -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
