I like the shot of her looking through the window. Nice pose and framing. You could work on the rendering and tonality a bit. I also like 5302, although her right knee bumping the edge of frame is a bit unhappy. Clipping body parts usually works as long as its a big cut and works well within the frame. Small cuts right at the edge of the frame usually don't work -- ditto, cutting of just the feet.
A good first effort. Paul On Oct 15, 2010, at 5:55 AM, Walter Gilbert wrote: > Hi all, > > Well, I had my very first photo shoot today. All things considered, I think > it went fairly well. I did get some good shots, a couple of great shots, and > many that will wind up being salvageable. Here are a few shots to give a > reasonable approximation: > > http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/sets/72157625167892920/ > > Nothing went as planned, and I hadn't the foggiest notion what I was doing. > But, somehow, I managed not to lose my friend (Megan, the model) -- at least > until she's seen the images. There are a few that have clunky backgrounds > that I intend to obscure at some point. Beyond that, does anyone have any > hits or tips that I might use to make the images look better? > > Comments, critiques, and advice are, of course, welcome. > > Best, > > Walt > > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
