Thanks, Larry!  For the pointers and kind words.

I agree with you on both images. I left that yellow overly bright thinking it would help bring out her eyes in 5354, but it turns out to be more of a distraction. And I bumped up the green a bit too much trying to lend a little color to an otherwise extremely bland background, but it appears I OD'd a bit.

BTW -- I ended up doing the whole thing without a tripod, as I had left it leaning up against the wall when I went to meet her, and didn't want to delay things by going to get it. I suppose I could've gotten more images to turn out if I'd brought one, though I wonder if I would've thought to take many lower angle shots if I had.

-- Walt



On 10/17/2010 2:09 AM, Larry Colen wrote:
On Oct 16, 2010, at 11:21 PM, Walter Gilbert wrote:

Me again.

First off, I just want to thank everyone who's been so willing to help me out 
with advice.  It really is helping me to know what to look out for on my next 
session -- whenever that'll be -- and I do appreciate it.

I've just added about ten more shots to the ones posted earlier, and below is posted the 
link to the first of the ten, or so, I just uploaded.  Click "Next" as needed, 
or as directed by your physician.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/5088722586/in/set-72157625167892920/
Nice work.

5353 seems a bit green, and 5354 seems to have weird color balance.

You definitely have some keepers in that set.

As two and a half hours work, I think I came out with respectable number of 
usable photos, and am overall pleased with my first attempt at portraiture.

Anyway, I'd like any thoughts anyone may have to offer on where I went right, 
and where I went wrong, or could've done better (aside from the shiny ares, 
which I find eternally vexing and irksome).

Again, thanks to all of you.

Best,

Walt



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