On 2010-10-21 19:56 , Nick David Wright wrote:
Hi all, my new web site is fully online and ready to go.

Would love some feedback.

i like it overall -- it's attractive and the photos are good; the portfolios seem to have very few images; what is your goal -- share your work? sell photos? get gigs?

i'd suggest something on the front page other than a forced slideshow of the same material in the portfolios -- perhaps the two images on the portfolio page with direct links to each portfolio, positioned subordinate to a small amount of text, such as a one line description of what one will find on the site, something like "seeing the people and places of the rural heartland")

the serif type is no problem for your name, but in the small blue type it's not attractive, hard to notice, and a bit hard to read

instead of "i first started making money", which gives an kind of flip impression, how about "my pro photography began"?

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