On 2010-10-21 19:56 , Nick David Wright wrote:
Hi all, my new web site is fully online and ready to go.
Would love some feedback.
i like it overall -- it's attractive and the photos are good; the
portfolios seem to have very few images; what is your goal -- share your
work? sell photos? get gigs?
i'd suggest something on the front page other than a forced slideshow of
the same material in the portfolios -- perhaps the two images on the
portfolio page with direct links to each portfolio, positioned
subordinate to a small amount of text, such as a one line description of
what one will find on the site, something like "seeing the people and
places of the rural heartland")
the serif type is no problem for your name, but in the small blue type
it's not attractive, hard to notice, and a bit hard to read
instead of "i first started making money", which gives an kind of flip
impression, how about "my pro photography began"?
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