Cesar,

Some good work here.
If I may, I'd like to offer constructive comments on some:

Bicycle stop:  I like the layout, but the human clutter (power lines) hurt it.  
The more I shoot nature scenes, the less I shoot nature scenes.  It gets 
tougher all the time to just shoot nature.

Heather:  Catching eyes is always great.  Is this full-frame?  I wonder if some 
cropping could help it even more.

Adelaide Pair:  All I could think of was the TV commercial about the "European 
Shoulder Bag". :-)

Engagement: Very pretty

Dining: Nice, but the couple needed to be below-center.

Omoa Seller:  Just a little re-positioning for a hat over his face would have 
gone a long way.  Lots of potential.


Sincerely, 

Collin Brendemuehl 

"He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose" 
-- Jim Elliott 





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