Thanks Ken. It wasn't intended as anything other than a record of the frozen
canal, but your comments will make me think again next time.

Chris

> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of
> Ken Waller
> Sent: 22 December 2010 20:20
> To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List
> Subject: Re: The canal is cold again.
> 
> took a quick look at your images - I'll comment on the first two
> 
> #5212-10 - IMO you've included too much in this image for it to be any
> more
> than a documentary of the site. By loosing most of the RH side, making
> it a
> portrait orientation (Including the walker, shoreline, the bridge
> opening &
> the background boat) it becomes a much stronger image. The contents of
> the
> RH side is competing with the stronger elements on the LH side.
> 
> #5209-9  Same general critique applies here - loose about a quarter of
> the
> image on the RH side up to a bit right of the bridge openinmg.
> 
> My $.02
> 
> Kenneth Waller
> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Chris Mitchell" <[email protected]>
> Subject: GESO: The canal is cold again.
> 
> 
> > 2010 comes to an end as it began. The Grand Union Canal runs close to
> my
> > house and it's frozen again. Very seasonal, but knowing our weather,
> it'll
> > probably be thawed by Christmas day.
> >
> > http://www.mitch.myzen.co.uk/ColdCanal2/
> >
> > Chris
> >
> > PS I just had to include another picture of Christine A's favourite
> > boat...
> 
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