Ken Waller wrote:
The mask has potential but I'd get rid of the bright spots in the
background.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
Something both you and JAck mentioned, Ken...
OTOH...
What I'd like to do is clone out the ones ON the mask... and the one on
the "eye" on the right.... and touching the top.
The rest of the back ground would be less distracting then, I think...
The Hotel shot is nice enough, and the light on the chair is nice, too -
but I bet you can do better with it... something not
quite intriguing enough - hmm maybe just needs a bit of boost in
saturation? Wondering which Garbo flic is being advertised .
ann
----- Original Message ----- From: "Boris Liberman" <[email protected]>
Subject: Boris PESOs #1 and #2
Hi!
I can't seem to get enough from Neve Tzedek neighborhood of Tel Aviv
and late afternoon shooting.
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2011/01/peso-2011-01-mask-of-mystery.html
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2011/01/peso-2011-02-boutique-hotel-entrance.html
Please be brutal and honest.
Boris
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