I think the detail looks pretty good. Maybe another nudge of sharpening.(?)
I would certainly try either removing or greatly softening that stem (?) coming 
out of the larger blossom. I might, also, remove the far left OOF blossom. If 
you have any more frame on the left, suggest including the tip of the petal 
touching the frame edge.

Jack

--- On Sun, 4/10/11, Steven Desjardins <[email protected]> wrote:

> From: Steven Desjardins <[email protected]>
> Subject: Peso: Really Red
> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
> Date: Sunday, April 10, 2011, 7:58 PM
> I took these shots this morning with
> the E-PL1 and my old m42 super
> Takumar 55 f2.
> 
> http://drd1135.smugmug.com/Photography/pdml/15174580_NVzVH#1247354829_4u7Td-L-LB
> 
> The flowers are so red that it obscures details .
> Desaturating shows
> more detail but the flowers look wrong.  Any
> suggestions?
> -- 
> Steve Desjardins
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