Hi Ed, Thanks for the mention! Steve Larson Redondo Beach, California ----- Original Message ----- From: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Sent: Monday, February 25, 2002 6:52 AM Subject: February 2002 PUG Comments
> I am following Cotty's lead...better late than never. Here is my first attempt at critiquing the PUG (or anything else). Since I've never done this before, you are free to critique my critique! > > Keep up the great work! > > Ed K. > > "Trax" - Chris Niesmertelny > Interesting - I like the way the tracks lead up and then slide over - good composition here. On the other hand, the top left composition of the other tire track bothers me a little. Not much I can do, removing the top left will remove the bend I like of the main track. Overall a nice shot. > > "BristleCone Pine" - Bruce Dayton > Very nice shot - good and crisp on the main subject. The OOF area provide interest, but don't deter. > > "Cadaques" - Jaume Lahuerta > The multi-angle step lines draw me right down the stairway. Nice! > > "No Mail Today" - Amita Guha > There is just something that draws me to this picture. I can't figure it out yet, but I like it. > > "Mirror Image??" - Toni Lankerd > Very nice - I like the flowers being set off with the black background. > > "Green Zen" - Flavio Minelli > Excellent! I think I'm a sucker for these types of shots. > > "Wood and Wire" - Darryn Richter > I would have liked to keep the entire lenght of post 'in focus', but that's what makes us all different. Nice capture. > > "Stef On Bike, Northmoor, 2000" - Cotty > I know alot has been said on this shot, but here I go anyway...I like the way the point of focus is in the middle of the greens on the right. The OOF in front and at the back really does it for me. This is something I haven't thought of, but now must go and try. > > "Trapped !!" - Geoffrey Stevens > Nice! I like the shine on the fence. > > "Peachy" - Steve Larson > Nice colors and composition. > - > This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. To unsubscribe, > go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the directions. Don't forget to > visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at http://pug.komkon.org . - This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. To unsubscribe, go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the directions. Don't forget to visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at http://pug.komkon.org .
