Thanks Godfrey I wasn´t sure about the blue square, but decided to keep it because it balances the blue in the flower and trousers, and the square shape of the window on the left, but I do see your point. I always find it difficult to decide when to stop leaving out elements.
DagT Den 13. juni 2011 kl. 18.41 skrev Godfrey DiGiorgi: > Dag, > > I love this photo ... it's great as is! > > I think it might be even stronger if you crop in on the right just > enough to lose the blue square in the top-right corner. It serves no > purpose, just draws my eye that way without adding anything to the > composition. Cropping the edge to remove it does not reduce the space > on the right in any way that it matters to my eye or disturbs the > message in the photo. > > Your subject title is interesting. I might have gone a different way > in titling, but I like it anyway. > > G > > On Mon, Jun 13, 2011 at 8:56 AM, DagT <[email protected]> wrote: >> http://www.thrane.name/Pictures/PAW/files/page7-1000-full.html >> K-5, DA15mm, 1/50s, f/11, ISO100 >> >> >> DagT >> http://www.thrane.name/ >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. >> > > > > -- > Godfrey > godfreydigiorgi.posterous.com > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
