On Jun 24, 2011, at 7:45 AM, J.C. O'Connell wrote:

> I like it but the person in the background is distracting.
> I would clone them out.
> 

On one level, I like the juxtaposition with the guy in the background,  to keep 
him in the photo, I'd crop out the lower left,  just below her feet, and a 
chunk of the pole, probably putting the corner right where the grass comes to a 
point.

If, however, I just wanted a shot of her playing guitar, rather than her 
playing for a disinterested audience, I'd crop the top just above her hat and 
just to the right of the guitar, cropping out both the guy and the car.  While 
this crop would lose the whimsy of the counterpoint between the two, I think 
that it would be a stronger composition on pure aesthetics.

--
Larry Colen [email protected] sent from i4est





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