Great concept and the color tone works well, as does the vignetting.
But... for this to really work you need an exquisitely elegant branch.
You have a very nice branch here, but it falls a bit short. There is a
tenancy towards a natural visual 'movement' in the lines of the branch,
but they get confounded in some places and some of the larger leaves
distract from the lines of the branch itself. Find the perfect branch
and light it this well and you'll have it...
- MCC
On 8/3/2011 12:57 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:
Hi!
Here is a nocturn(al flower)e...
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2011/08/peso-2011-29-nocturne.html
Have your brutal and honest say...
Thanks.
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