Christine, several things jump out to me with your sunflower - YMMV
The mostly centered composition is ok but the proximity of the petals to the
top edge draws my eye away from the subject - you need more space at the top
above the image - it would appear more of a crafted image as opposed to a
snap - which this image isn't.
The bright spot at around the 7 o'clock position is unfortunate.
But mostly I don't get the desaturation of the colors.
Just my $.02 s worth.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message -----
From: "Christine Aguila" <[email protected]>
Subject: PAW--Week 34--Sunflower
It's amazing to think that I only have 18 weeks left! Where did the time
go? Cheers, Christine
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