I like that one better, model-wise, the other is  better exposure-wise. But 
that is not a bad shot at all considering the harsh  outdoor lighting.

Marnie the almost akaless :-)

In a message dated  9/2/2011 8:19:33 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time, 
[email protected]  writes:
On 11-09-02 10:13 AM, Jack Davis wrote:
> Comments directed  toward the model, not the photographer: Her dress seam 
is crooked

Did I  mention there was wine involved? :)


>   and her smile  could be more complimentary is somewhat subdued.

More my fault than hers,  I fear. These were shot hand-held, wide 
aperture, so I lost a number of  better expressions to mis-focus and 
motion blur. Some of those shots are on  the edge of useable softness, so 
I may revist them. (Sometimes I can  successfully diminish softness by 
increasing LR "clarity" a bunch with the  brush tool.)

But come to think of it now, I should be able to safely  blame the tools 
here. I'm stuck with a ratty old obsolete and quite useless  K20D. It 
can't focus and it's quite useless in low light (ie anything dimmer  than 
an arc welding torch).

Meanwhile, you may be happier with her  expression in this one ...

http://goo.gl/1Mg2g   [500px]

Similar setup, but no fill flash. I didn't like the hot spots, so  we 
moved under cover for further shots.


>
> Exposure  well done. Bruce!
>
> Jack

Thanks for your comments,  Jack.

-bmw


>
>
> ----- Original Message  -----
> From: Bruce Walker<[email protected]>
> To:  Pentax-Discuss Mail List<[email protected]>
> Cc:
> Sent: Friday,  September 2, 2011 6:34 AM
> Subject: PESO Red
>
> Same venue  as "Here and now" PESO.  We were drinking wine and killing 
time waiting for  the Official Wedding Photog to wrap up in the garden. This 
guest was dying to  get her picture taken ...
>
> http://goo.gl/eIePW   [500px]
>
> K20D, DA* 55/1.4 @ 2.8, 1/180th sec, ISO 200.
>  Bare AF-540FGZ (M, 1/16th) lying on table to the right for front fill, 
outdoor  light in open shade (under an awning).
> LR3, PS CS5 for  retouch.
>
> Comments are most welcome.
>
> -bmw  


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