on 2011-10-10 23:22 Walt Gilbert wrote
So, I cropped the hell out of it, sharpened the hell out of it, added some
"film grain" to it, converted it to monochrome and made it into a silhouette.


http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/6233509410/
K100Ds, M 50/2, ISO 200, f/16, 1/500

I've toyed with tinting the background with somewhat interesting results, but
to my eye, they detract from what I've done already. So, I figured I'd ask if
anyone had any suggestions as to how I might improve it as an image.

it brings an instant grin, and the layout within the frame of the web and blips is pleasing; to my taste, there is too much sharpening; dropping that a bit might make the grain look more natural too, though the grain does help; i like the natural gradient in the background -- perhaps if the grain disappeared in the lower right? if you were to add color, i'd try red in upper left to orange-white in lower right


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