On Oct 28, 2011, at 4:35 AM, frank theriault wrote:

> I added a bit of grain to give it that "TriX" look:
> 
> http://knarfinthecity.blogspot.com/2011/10/hearing-voices.html
> 
> Hope you enjoy.  Comments welcome.

I love the concept.  The "grain" makes it a bit rough for my liking, but I 
don't know what you're starting with.  If a photo is a little rough, I find 
it's often best to just go with it and push it this hard.

I think it might work better if "Voices" were a bit more prominent.   Three 
possible crops:

A square crop, taking out the door to the left, which I don't think adds enough 
context to be worth the pixels.
A vertical crop, just to the left of the standing woman (probably my favorite)
A horizontal crop with the upper left corner  aligned with the upper left 
corner of the lower window.  That would really emphasize "Voices" and would be 
an entirely different picture.


> 
> cheers,
> frank
> 
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