On Fri, Feb 3, 2012 at 10:21 PM, Paul Ewins <[email protected]> wrote:
> I think the individual images are just fine, it is just that they are all 
> very different. A portfolio needs to feel cohesive, and there is more to it 
> than just the subject matter. Your portfolio has colour and monochrome, 
> verticals and horizontals, square and rectangular crops, closeups and full 
> length, dark backgrounds and light backgrounds. There is nothing wrong with 
> mixing styles in a portfolio, but as much as possible you should try and 
> harmonise things.  If most of your portfolio has one look and an image 
> departs from that look you have to justify it being there.

I understand and agree, mixing styles was something that we were
advised about, but I don't think that I've found a dominant style to
my portraits yet.  I get bored with a single look too.

>
> How are you displaying it? If they are mounted prints then format may be more 
> of an issue than mono vs colour. If it is to be projected then the reverse 
> might be true. For projection the order is really important too, since the 
> viewer might not be able to back and forth as they please (i.e. if shown to a 
> group of people). For mounted prints the order is still important, but you 
> might want to start and finish with strong images, or have contrasting images 
> side by side.

They were projected for the club, but I tried to work the order in a
way that made sense.  The general progression is from young to old.  I
also tried to group the scenes and styles together.  Beach with beach,
B&W together, even the direction of the main lighting.  I knew that
the pictures wouldn't be printed or go in a book, but I did try to
group them as if they would be.

>
> Don't think i'm the expert however, it is just that this is what I am 
> learning in my photo course and it is still very fresh in my mind. I have 
> just started second year and will have to hand in two printed portfolios by 
> mid-year, all shot from scratch, and I only have half an idea for one of them.
>
Thank you for the thoughts.  This was the first time I've ever tried
to put together a collection like this and it was tougher than I
thought it might be.  Many of these were also pulled from my existing
files, and not purpose shot for the portfolio.

> Good luck with it,
>
> Paul
>
>
>
> On 04/02/2012, at 12:07 PM, Larry Colen wrote:
>
>>
>>
>> On 2/3/2012 4:55 PM, David Parsons wrote:
>>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/alohadave/sets/72157629121933767/
>>>
>>> My camera club has been doing something new since last year.  We've
>>> been working on portfolios.  It's a tough challenge because some of my
>>> favorite shots were winnowed out because they just didn't fit with the
>>> theme, in my case portraiture.
>>>
>>> I don't have a huge library of portraits, but I have enough to make it
>>> difficult to decide which ones to include.  It also re-affirmed my
>>> feeling that portraiture is where the majority of my growth will be
>>> over the next several years.  It is my goal to eventually have a
>>> studio doing portraiture, but I have plenty of time for that.
>>
>> I can see a definite progression in your work. You started out with the key 
>> light on the right, and then moved it to the left.
>>
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