Good subject, but bw rendering needs attention.  Contrast for sure.  Cheers, 
Christine 



On Jul 26, 2012, at 10:23 AM, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote:

> Me too. It looks to me that you could bump the contrast quite a bit.
> 
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> On Thu, Jul 26, 2012 at 8:44 AM, Daniel J. Matyola <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
>> I like the pattern of the trees.  I agree with Paulo about the grass;
>> perhaps if you cropped out all the grass it would be stronger as an
>> abstract.  What is the (almost) horizontal line about a third of the
>> way from the bottom?
>> Dan Matyola
>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
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>> On Wed, Jul 25, 2012 at 11:21 PM, P. J. Alling
>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> I hadn't done a B&W in a while.  This seemed to lend itself to such a
>>> rendering.
>>> 
>>> http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1604247/PESO/PESO%20--%20pines.html
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