Dan,
I think Ken is right, stronger as just the balloons.
Or include more of the iphone/ipad photographers, down to their feet.
Then the photo becomes about them and the balloons.
Regards,  Bob S.

On Sat, Aug 11, 2012 at 7:53 AM, Daniel J. Matyola <danmaty...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Thanks, Ken.  I think you are probably correct.
>
> In this frame, I was trying to include the iPad and cell phone being
> used to capture the scene.  There were more photographers using those
> devices at the festival than photographers uding DSLRs and compact
> digital cameras combined.
>
> Dan Matyola
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>
>
> On Sat, Aug 11, 2012 at 8:39 AM, Kenneth Waller <kwal...@peoplepc.com> wrote:
>> The stuff along the bottom edge is distracting IMO.
>> A stronger image would be that nice arrangement of balloons all by itself.
>>
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