I can't tell - it doesn't fit onto my screen. even if I resize my screen to 1024x768. So I can't see what the composition is like. But I think I would place the figure closer to the lower right corner. I like the evocative feel of lone-person-on-lonely-beach but think that the person needs to be smaller in relation to the whole frame. And maybe lighten it just a touch?
stan > From: "David P. Chernicoff" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Reply-To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Date: Sun, 17 Mar 2002 18:53:03 -0500 > To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Subject: Comments requested > > I shot this picture last weekend. It's at Montara State Beach in NorCal, > just for the record. > > http://www.supercharger.net/private/beach.jpg > > The photo is very strong and appealing to me, but I think my judgement is > skewed because I know what the young lady who's walking at the water's edge > is thinking about. I'd like some feedback on it as a photograph. Thanks - > > David< > - > This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. To unsubscribe, > go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the directions. Don't forget to > visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at http://pug.komkon.org . - This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. To unsubscribe, go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the directions. Don't forget to visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at http://pug.komkon.org .
