That should say, "but so does Joe's first example with line four read as a pair of anapests.
On Feb 21, 2013, at 9:47 AM, Paul Stenquist <[email protected]> wrote: > Ann, > Yours does scan nicely, but so does Joe's first example with line read as a > pair of anapests. > Paul > > On Feb 21, 2013, at 9:11 AM, Ann Sanfedele <[email protected]> wrote: > >> I meant to post to the whole list... >> >> >> -------- Original Message -------- >> Subject: Re: March PUG - Please Read!! >> Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2013 09:10:24 -0500 >> From: Ann Sanfedele <[email protected]> >> To: Joseph McAllister <[email protected]>, steve harley <[email protected]> >> >> Guys... >> >> Note nowhere in H B's Wiki does it mention (at least I didn't see it) as >> one of his accomplishments... >> >> Yours still doesn't scan Joe :( >> >> So I give you the ann edited version of Steve's original post. >> >> mister bayer >> was a purveyor >> of style so simple and pure >> that when he expressed it >> most found it eclectic >> so his writings remain quite obscure >> >> This turned out to be fun :-) >> >> ann >> >> >> >> On 2/21/2013 03:24, Joseph McAllister wrote: >>> >>> On Feb 20, 2013, at 20:24 , steve harley wrote: >>> >>>>>> mister bayer >>>>>> was a purveyor >>>>>> of a style so simple and pure >>>>>> that when he expressed it >>>>>> most found it too eclectic >>>>>> and his writings remain quite obscure >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> that doesn't scan too well - don't think >>>>> e. e. would have approved >>>> >>>> yes i admire e. e., but i'm not his protégée >>>> i refer to herbert bayer >>>> to deflect the reflex >>>> that cummings rules the miniscules >>> >>> >>> I hope you enjoyed my variations, Ann. >>> >>> >>> Sorry Steve. I had to clean up the grammar, shorten for brevity, and >>> punctuate. >>> >>> Mister Bayer >>> was a purveyor >>> of style so simple and pure, >>> though he oft expressed it >>> t'was found too eclectic >>> thus his writings remain quite obscure. >>> >>> V-2 >>> >>> Mister Bayer >>> was a purveyor >>> of pills so simple and pure, >>> though he oft expressed it, >>> at times was quite hectic, >>> thus his pain remained a bit dour. >>> >>> >>> Joseph McAllister >>> [email protected] >>> >>> It seems that I need to stop my mind running off at the fingertips. >>> — Mike Wilson >>> >>> >> >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
