Thanks guys - After looking at the two earlier versions, I finally settled here. The story of the photo isn't all of the locks. It's that one lock at the bottom center. The title referring to a pattern is probably a bit misleading.
I cut off the other locks because they kept drawing my attention away from the different lock. There is a story about that different lock (that would be boring to most people) that goes with the picture. The final photo and the story were sent to a few local friends. The 16:9 aspect ratio makes a better fit for my screen wallpaper. At the end of the day, when you get a lot of input from a lot of people, it is valuable, but you still need to go with your own judgement. Thanks, gs George Sinos -------------------- www.GeorgesPhotos.net www.GeorgeSinos.com On Tue, Apr 2, 2013 at 11:25 PM, Aahz Maruch <[email protected]> wrote: > On Tue, Apr 02, 2013, Bob Sullivan wrote: >> On Tue, Apr 2, 2013 at 11:56 AM, George Sinos <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> <georgesinos.com/blog/2013/4/2/pattern-interrupted> >>> >>> I changed the aspect ration to 16:9, moved that divider bar off of the >>> center line, moved the different lock to the lower third dividing >>> line. To draw more attention to it, I cropped both the top row and >>> right column of locks. I also desaturated the color on the other >>> locks a little bit. I bumped the clarity on the doors to emphasize the >>> dirt. >> >> You cut off parts of the locks! >> Earlier versions were to blah for me. >> This version elicits a reaction, but not positive! > > That's what I said about v2 as well (this being v3, now). I really > think partial locks don't work. > -- > Hugs and backrubs -- I break Rule 6 http://rule6.info/ > <*> <*> <*> > Help a hearing-impaired person: http://rule6.info/hearing.html > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

