On Wed, May 15, 2013 at 9:57 PM, Rob Studdert <[email protected]> wrote:
> On 15 May 2013 05:42, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Here's my own recent dusk photography result, from our backyard Kanzan
>> Cherry standard, giving one of its best shows this year:
>>
>> http://www.flickr.com/bruce_m_walker/8722338154/lightbox/
>>
>> I lit this with an AF540FGZ inside a 36" umbrella softbox on a 9-foot
>> stand that I extended up into the tree. I stood on a ladder and
>> composed until I got the clouds in behind. I also added a green gel to
>> the flash and colour-corrected that in Lightroom which caused the sky
>> and clouds to go pinker to better match the flowers.
>>
>> K20D, DA* 55/1.4 @ 6.3, 1/160th, ISO 100; Lightroom, Photoshop.
>
> Hi Bruce,
>
> That's a pretty impressive shot, the colour combination between the
> bloom and the sky is just about perfect, I live the composition too.
> If I could apply the minimal of constructive criticism I would say
> that the only element of it that distracts me in any way is the
> apparent brightness of the underside of the leaves. There was
> obviously little option but I wonder if the shot would benefit from
> them being dodged a little?

Thank you, Rob. I agree with your observation on the leaf underside. I
think it would emphasize the bloom more to reduce the leaf brightness
1/2 a stop or so. Appreciate your keen eye!

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-bmw

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