Thanks, Ann. I tend to agree with what you say; after all, that's the way I originally saw and composed it. Nevertheless, I also processed it according to Ken's comments. I'll keep both and try to look at them in a while with a fresh eye.
Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola On Mon, Aug 12, 2013 at 9:22 PM, Ann Sanfedele <[email protected]> wrote: > Oh dear I hope you don't listen to Ken on this one... > > He and I may often agree, but for me, the current proportions and > the bit of the other flower _add_ to making this a bit more than > a flower picture. the two leaves below the blossom that is escaping > at the top are interesting forms.. > > That the pink flower is the same pink as the main bloom is important in > this. The leaves are very interestingly arranged and intersting in > themselves. > > just my 2 cents as I procrastinate this evening. > > ann > > > > > > > > On 8/12/2013 19:50, Daniel J. Matyola wrote: >> >> Thanks, Ken. Your comments are quite helpful. >> >> Dan Matyola >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >> >> >> On Mon, Aug 12, 2013 at 12:00 PM, <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> Well focused image but I'd definitely eliminate the partial bloom along >>> the >>> top edge. A square crop would minimize the blank LRH corner >>> >>> Kenneth Waller >>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller >>> >>> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Daniel J. Matyola" >>> <[email protected]> >>> Subject: PESO: Dianthus >>> >>> >>>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17491773 >>>> Comments are invited. >>>> >>>> Dan Matyola >>>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> [email protected] >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>> follow the directions. >> >> > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
