A silhouette might work, but as it is, it's just blocked up shadows bleeding into his partner & into what appears to be a person just barely visible over his right shoulder in the background.

On 11/16/2013 7:19 PM, knarf wrote:
Oh dear me, no!

If anything I'd silhouette him. I like that I can't see his face.

I don't know why but it's the fact I can see her but not him that I like in 
this.

Perhaps I'm alone in that thought...

Cheers,
frank

Richard Womer <[email protected]> wrote:
Frank, I like the atomosphere and composition, but I suggest that you
dodge the man a bit (especially the face).  It looks as though the
woman has Sasquatch under the brolly with her.

Cheers,

Rick

On Nov 16, 2013, at 6:10 PM, knarf wrote:

We finally had a sunny Saturday today (after three or four rainy ones
in a row). This was taken last week. Or the week before. I can't
remember:

http://knarfinthecity.blogspot.ca/2013/11/umbrella-for-two.html?m=1

Hope you enjoy. Comments always welcome.

Cheers,
frank
“Analysis kills spontaneity.” -- Henri-Frederic Amiel

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