Hi Dan, 

The more I look at these the more I agree with you.

This one is better exposed (look at the track) and I like that patch of grass 
on the right for compositional reasons but the body position and facial 
expression of Time Trial overcome those technical matters.

Thanks for the critique. Much appreciated. And thanks to all who looked and 
commented. 

Cheers,
frank

On 29 June, 2014 2:58:08 PM EDT, "Daniel J. Matyola" <[email protected]> 
wrote:
>I like this image, but I like "Time Trial" better, mostly because of
>the angles of her arms;  it looks more graceful and athletic that the
>position of the arms in this image.
>
>Dan Matyola
>http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
>
>
>On Sat, Jun 28, 2014 at 11:14 PM, knarf <[email protected]>
>wrote:
>> Another shot from my brief stay at an in-line skating competition
>today. Same vantage-point as Time Trial; it was the only one without
>horrendous background clutter.
>>
>> I was initially attracted to Time Trial due to the young lady's
>expression. Overall I think this one's better for many reasons but I
>don't want to critique my own photo:
>>
>> http://knarfdummyblog.blogspot.ca/2014/06/intensity.html?m=1
>>
>> You can if you want, though. Comments always appreciated. Hope you
>enjoy.
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> frank
>> “Analysis kills spontaneity.” -- Henri-Frederic Amiel
>>
>>
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