Well taken points. I want to say that I had nothing to do with the horseshoe's being hung there. Not speaking to any of your points, just feel like letting you know I didn't decorate the scene. The horseshoe (oddly, very thin) together with the somewhat more prominent orchard trees, I feel balance off acceptably with the heaver fencepost. An element not spoken too, I was very much taken by the wheat like foreground grasses.
Appreciate your commenting, Bob! Jack ----- Original Message ----- From: "Bob W-PDML" <[email protected]> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, April 22, 2015 10:57:00 AM Subject: Re: Peso-Acacia Rd I really like the idea of that, and I really like the scene, the the light, colours and the overall ambiance, but there's a couple of things that for me mean it doesn't quite work. First is the fact that the top of the horseshoe is lost in the background, so it doesn't quite stand out enough; second is that the horseshoe and the fencepost divide the frame more or less evenly and they are of different visual weights, so the composition is unbalanced and my eye can't settle on one or the other. It would have been better to have the horseshoe on its own as a point against the background; perhaps a bit closer so more detail was available, and a touch more blur to the background. But a lovely scene and well worth going back tomorrow in the same light, if you can. B > On 22 Apr 2015, at 17:35, Jack Davis <[email protected]> wrote: > > > Short stop on Acacia Rd. Walnut trees..maybe. > > Comments when through yawning? Thanks! ;-)) > > Jack > > http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=913 > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
