Thanks, Alan. I think I like the "re-work" a bit better. The original just has too much very dark space, at least on my monitor, for my taste. Perhaps if you cropped the re-work to include a bit less of the foreground it might not be so dominant in the image as it is now.
Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola On Sat, Apr 25, 2015 at 11:36 AM, Alan C <[email protected]> wrote: > Dan, if you scroll 2 to the left you can see a re-work. Not very successful. > It was still quite dark. The foreground comprises only dry grass & rocks. > > Alan C > > -----Original Message----- From: Daniel J. Matyola > Sent: Saturday, April 25, 2015 5:01 PM > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List > Subject: Re: PESO: Lowveld Dawn > > Warm and inviting, with nice color. > > I would like to see just a bit more detail in the foreground. > > Dan Matyola > http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola > > > On Sat, Apr 25, 2015 at 10:59 AM, Alan C <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Sunrise at 06:18 this morning @ 18°C. 32°C by noon. >> >> >> https://www.flickr.com/photos/wisselstroom/17239511786/in/photostream/lightbox/ >> >> K7 with the DA 18-55 >> >> Alan C >> >> --- >> This email has been checked for viruses by Avast antivirus software. >> http://www.avast.com >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. > > --- > This email has been checked for viruses by Avast antivirus software. > http://www.avast.com > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
