Interesting and pleasing image. I really like the way you caught the light from the smart phone on her face.
If it were my image. I would keep the gent next to her -- I think he adds to the atmosphere -- but I would eliminate or darken the bright light in the upper left, and perhaps brighten up the "Bud Light" sign. Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola On Sat, Jun 6, 2015 at 12:01 AM, P.J. Alling <[email protected]> wrote: > https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1604247/PESO/PESO%20---%20%20barbelle.html > > Equipment: Pentax K-5II w/smc Pentax FA 43mm f1.9 Limited. > > As usual comments are welcome but may be totally ignored. > > -- > I don't want to achieve immortality through my work; I want to achieve > immortality through not dying. > -- Woody Allen > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

