I agree with Cotty. You've got some nice crisp action shots but the background ruins them. Maybe drape something over the fence ?

Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller

----- Original Message ----- From: "Jack Davis" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Geso, jays in flight


What Cotty said!!

J

----- Original Message -----
From: "Steve Cottrell" <[email protected]>
To: "pentax list" <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, August 11, 2015 10:56:05 AM
Subject: Re: Geso, jays in flight

On 10/8/15, David J Brooks, discombobulated, unleashed:

I made a small, yes Cotty a small gallery of my recent jays in flight shots.

http://www.caughtinmotion.com/2015-jays1/album/index.html

I know a few should be cropped but these are for your viewing pleasure
as is.:-)

You call that small!

The fence really bugs me man. If the camera was a couple more feet away
from the ground you'd have grass as the back drop. Maybe shoot wide open
to soften it up a bit? Their actual movement is crystal sharp so that's
nailed. I like the interaction when there's 2 or more birds in the frame.

Ditch yer recliner for a bar stool!!

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Cheers,
 Cotty


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