I like the last image bet -- more "attitude" in the model. Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
On Fri, Sep 25, 2015 at 7:57 AM, Jack Davis <[email protected]> wrote: > This initial image is beautifully done! Well rendered and with a casual sense > that's very appealing. > > J > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Igor PDML-StR" <[email protected]> > To: "PDML" <[email protected]> > Sent: Thursday, September 24, 2015 6:27:14 PM > Subject: Re: GESO - Once upon a morning ... > > > Bruce, (and Cotty). > > Yep, I was off by one, starting from #4[5] and ending with #8[9]. (So that > what I wrote #4 should be #5) > Below are the corrected numbers - I mark the corrected once with []. > > Igor > > PS. I don't break things, I just notice them. > Don't shoot the messenger. (Unless it's a photo-shoot. ... or your name > is franK. :-) ) > > > On Thu, 24 Sep 2015, Igor PDML-StR wrote: > >> >> Bruce, >> >> I second Cotty's summary word by word (even though we probably differ in >> detail). >> >> Being less diplomatic than Cotty, I can give some specifics if you are >> interested. I especially liked 1, [5], 11, 12, even though #11 might look >> somhhwat cliche (or was it your photo that I've seen before? ;-) ) >> (If those were mine, I would probably try to tone down slightly the window >> light reflection from the RHS wall in #[5]) >> >> Unless it was a part of some special story, I'd say the toilet in the >> background of #[6],[7] is not as glamorous as the rest. >> >> I like the idea of using reflections in #[7],[8] but it would've been >> better if >> the mirror were cleaner in #8. :-) But I suspect that it may not have >> been a planned shot (has it?). >> >> >> From the entire set, only two are somewhat bothering me: >> In #[9], the pose is too static (as in obviously posed). It looks >> obvious that >> she was standing in that pose for some time. It is present in some other >> shots, but the frozen muscle strain is not as obvious in those. >> Sorry, from the previous discussion, I suspect that it doesn't bother you. >> >> In #10, with that counterlight, - it's an interesting effect, but I wish it >> was softer with that. I don't know how that can be reached. >> I am thinking that a "soft" portrait lens (Pentax FA-85) might work for that, >> even though I've never used one. This photo is too softer than a sharp one, >> but just not soft enough for that "creamy" cloud-of-dream look. >> I don't know, - maybe some local PS experts (Mark?) know how to enhance that >> in post? >> >> Igor >> >> PS. The website design is weird: clicking on the thumbnail of the "active" >> photo moves the thumbnail tape to the top, and the active photo disappears, >> so you'd have to reload the page and start over. And that's in 4 different >> browsers on Windows. I understand that it is not your website. >> >> >> Steve Cottrell Thu, 24 Sep 2015 13:09:50 -0700 wrote: >> >> On 24/9/15, Bruce Walker, discombobulated, unleashed: >> >>> NSFW for mild topless nudity. A baker's dozen shots ... >>> >>> https://www.zivity.com/models/Araina/photosets/57 >>> >>> These images are from my first shoot with local model Araina Nespiak >>> in August. Taken in a borrowed conference space in Mississauga. >> >> >> Great job as usual. Regarding style, some I'm not bothered about but >> some are superb. Really really superb. >> > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
