Thanks again, Igor. I made the right side and bottom crops you suggested
and have permanently changed a couple copies. The moon now falls comfortably
on the right 1/3 crop line.

J

----- Original Message -----
From: "Igor PDML-StR" <[email protected]>
To: "PDML" <[email protected]>
Sent: Wednesday, September 30, 2015 11:37:34 AM
Subject: Re: Peso-Primal Migration



Jack,
Sometimes, while explaining physics of recoil to my freshman students in 
mechanics, I draw a gun on the board, saying: "I am not a very good 
artist. I am sure you can draw a gun much better, ... and, being from 
Texas, much faster..."

Having seen this photo, - I wouldn't challenge you to a duel! :-)

I enjoy this shot and the composition. I didn't notice any halos until 
read about them in a comment, but even after that, I don't find them 
disturibing.

The only minor tweak that I would have considered if it were my photo, is 
maybe very slightly cropping at the bottom (something like 1/15th or even 
1/20th of the height), and then on the right to maintain the proportions.
I think that might place the sun in a more "powerful" position.
But I am not even sure about that... I'd try and see if that works, and if 
not, - would leave it as is.

Igor



On Wed, Sep 30, 2015 at 10:59 AM, Jack Davis wrote:

> I blindly pointed my A*300mm F/2.8
> toward the sound and shot a couple frames

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