Think much of the facial highlight surfaces are slightly clipped. I'd remove the dark seam in the pillow. The fact that it is directly in line with her mouth bothers me. Would like the blocked shadows lightened. Especially the hair. I like the possibilities!
J ----- Original Message ----- From: "P.J. Alling" <[email protected]> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> Sent: Monday, November 30, 2015 9:10:54 AM Subject: PESO -- Fiona Not sure if this works, not sure focus was acceptable, not sure I like the tonal range, not sure I like any of it. https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1604247/PESO/PESO%20--%20fiona112715.html Equipment: Pentax K-5II w/smc Pentax M 85mm f2.0 As usual comments are welcome but may be totally ignored. Note: Processed to B&W using DXO Filmpack 3, TXP presets with a Green filter, and medium format Grain. -- I don't want to achieve immortality through my work; I want to achieve immortality through not dying. -- Woody Allen -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
