Boris Liberman wrote:
I really couldn't think of anything else when I was taking and processing this photograph... http://pentax-ways.blogspot.co.il/2016/04/2016-20-geometry-and-light.html As always - honest and brutal - please comment.
Very nice photo. I love the geometry and composition. I first looked at it on my phone, and the tonality looked rather flat and blah, it works a lot better on my computer screen. It seems to be a photo that works best at large sizes. (this is a hint, if it underwhelms you as a viewer, look at it on a larger screen).
I have absolutely no idea how to accomplish this, but I get the feeling that it might have some room for improvement in the tonality. If it is someplace convenient for you to get to, try shooting it under different lighting, maybe overcast, or when the sun puts that side of the building in shade. It's a very good picture that I think could be excellent.
I think it is one that might work best as a print. If you do print it up, just for fun, try hanging the print at an angle so that one of the series of parallel lines is either horizontal or vertical. Unfortunately, that's rather difficult to do on a computer screen.
Thanks!
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