PJ, thanks for the comment. The story doesn't fit into a cropped frame, though; 
so obviously I wasn't telling it well.

At my wife's suggestion I brightened the "young" figure, and I think it works 
better:

http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18295152&size=lg

Cheers,

Rick

On Oct 9, 2016, at 3:20 PM, P.J. Alling wrote:

> Nice catch, but I think you crop about half the frame out and make the story 
> tighter.  Often in photography as well as in writing when telling a story 
> less is more.
> 
> On 10/9/2016 2:59 PM, Rick Womer wrote:
>> Along La Prada in Balboa Park:
>> 
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18295152&size=lg
>> 
>> (K-5, DA 16-45)
>> 
>> Comments appreciated.
>> 
>> Rick
>> 
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>> 
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