Damn - forgot to hit Reply List...hope this gets it back on track.

I think it was better with the water included. It needs the wider view to emphasize the line of the rocks leading to the water and loses something with just the rocks and sand.

-p


On 7/10/2017 6:42 PM, Larry Colen wrote:


Paul in MKE wrote:
Larry,

I like this a lot, but agree with Rick that you should crop out some of
the sky.  I liked putting the horizon about 1/3 down from the top, but
you need to be content about losing the 3:2 aspect ratio - don't take
anything off the sides.

Thanks Paul. After Rick's post I slightly tweaked a copy to trim the little bit of water (actually a creek, not the ocean) out of the top:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/35840242545/in/album-72157685968095156/

full set:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/albums/72157685968095156


-p


On 7/10/2017 11:00 AM, Larry Colen wrote:


Rick Womer wrote:
Larry, that's beautiful. The curving line on rocks and the quiet beach
are very tranquil;, the pools with the blue reflections are very
intriguing.

My only suggestion would be to trim a bit off the top; the thin strip
of ocean is distracting.

Thank you very much.  I struggled a lot with where to crop the top of
that one, because when I trimmed the top like that, particularly if I
kept the 3:2 aspect ratio, I lost a bit more of something else.


Cheers,

Rick
http://photo.net/photos/RickW


On Mon, Jul 10, 2017 at 2:42 AM, Larry Colen<[email protected]>  wrote:
A lot of the time when I post a photo, I know why I like it.  This
is one
that I don't have a good understanding of its strengths and weaknesses, which is why I didn't post it earlier. However a friend just commented
positively about it on flickr, so I thought I'd give it a try.  I
cropped a
lot out of the original frame, so there's a lot of latitude in
re-composition.

https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/35691250121/


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