I think it's improved. Still not one of your best, but better and interesting.
Paul via phone > On Sep 6, 2017, at 9:39 PM, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote: > > In response to Larry’s and Paul’s suggestions, I did some cropping, pulled > down the exposure of most of the scene, and dodged the shadows on the right a > bit: > > https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/organize/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv > > Improved? > > Rick > > >> On Sep 5, 2017, at 9:18 PM, Larry Colen <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> >> >> Paul Stenquist wrote: >>> Nice on the left side of frame, but the huge impenetrable shadow doesn't >>> work for me. HDR or pulling up shadow detail in PS levels would undoubtedly >>> help some. >> >> I mostly agree, I'd just crop about 15% off the right and bottom. >> >>> >>> Paul via phone >>> >>>> On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:34 PM, Rick Womer<[email protected]> wrote: >>>> >>>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv/A >>>> >>>> (K-5, DA 50-200) >>>> >>>> Comments cordially invited. >>>> >>>> Rick >>>> >>>> -- >>>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>>> [email protected] >>>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>>> follow the directions. >>> >> >> -- >> Larry Colen [email protected] (postbox on min4est) http://red4est.com/lrc >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
