The first image was what I was thinking Larry, but now the bridge to the
left of the arch is interacting negatively with the bench - with this image
you need a higher POV.
The second wide shot is pretty nice as is.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message -----
From: "Larry Colen" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Done with my backlog
Ken Waller wrote on 12/23/18 9:26 AM:
Larry, I'd prefer the bench image have more separation from the bridge -
ie, change your POV to the right.
I posted two different versions with more separation, albeit vertical:
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/45691930734/in/album-72157701605621832/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/45691932144/in/album-72157701605621832/
The table and chair image needs to include the entirety of the wall
pictures.
Hmmm, OK. I'll try to keep that in mind the next time I'm up there. I
didn't set out to take that shot.
I'm ambivalent as to whether the B+W is better/worse than the color
version.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message ----- From: "Larry Colen" <[email protected]>
Subject: Done with my backlog
I finally made it through my backlog of photos from my trip north
Here’s a bench overlooking the Alsea Bay in Waldport, at sunset
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/32543096228/in/album-72157701605621832/
Here’s a photo which I can’t decide whether it works in color, black and
white, both, or neither
color
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/45692011634/in/album-72157674721946567/
b&w
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/45692008734/in/album-72157674721946567/
(constructive feedback particularly appreciated on this one)
Here’s my full collection of albums from several trips to the northwet
this year:
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/collections/72157697401822271/
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