On Tue, Feb 2, 2010 at 12:51 PM, <pugs-comm...@feather.perl6.nl> wrote:
> The methods in this role are:
>
> =head2 method get {...}
>
> -Returns the next item for that iteration. The grouping of elements
> -returned in each iteration is visible if this iterator is being used
> -to build a slice. While building a list, the items will be flattened.
> +Used to iterator over a flat list (the context supplied by a slurpy binding).
^^^ typo; should be "Used to iterate."
> +Returns the next element from the iterator after flattening any leading
> parcel.
>
> -When it runs out of items, it will fail with the C<EMPTY> exception.
> +When it runs out of elements, it will fail with the C<EMPTY> exception.
> As with most failures, it is generally returned without throwing it,
> unless the calling lexical scope requests it to be thrown via "use fatal".
A few too many "it"s with different antecedents there. Might want to
toss in a noun or two.
--
Mark J. Reed <markjr...@gmail.com>
