> -----Original Message----- > From: Jean-Michel POURE [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: 21 January 2004 10:32 > To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Subject: [pgadmin-hackers] Advocay page > > Dear all, > > Any feedback is welcome about the advocacy page: > http://www.pgadmin.org/pgadmin3/advocacy.php
Cool, looks good. Coupla points: - 'In the long run' not 'On the long run' - 'PostgreSQL and pgAdmin free software are...' isn't something you would write (or say). Try something like 'The free software packages PostgreSQL and pgAdmin are...' - The indenting of the list of entries at the bottom is all messed up. Cheers, Dave. ---------------------------(end of broadcast)--------------------------- TIP 8: explain analyze is your friend
