On Thu, Apr 30, 2015 at 2:37 AM, Andres Freund <[email protected]> wrote: > Introduce replication progress tracking infrastructure. > [...]
Some comments about the docs: 1) "the the": + <entry> + Create a replication origin with the the passed in external + name, and create an internal id for it. + </entry> + </row> 2) Missing markup <type> for oid. + <entry> + Lookup replication origin by name and return the internal + oid. If no corresponding replication origin is found a error + is thrown. + </entry> + </row> 3) Perhaps "Check that a replication has been configured in the current session" instead of using a question? + <entry> + Has a replication origin been configured in the current session? + </entry> 4) Missing markup <type> for oid? + Replication origins consist out of a name and a oid. The name, which 5) "will persist" or "will be persistent", not "will be persist" I guess. + If that's done replication progress will be persist in a crash safe 6) The use of "that, that" looks weird to me. There should be only one. + system to one other, another problem can be that, that it is hard to avoid Regards, -- Michael -- Sent via pgsql-committers mailing list ([email protected]) To make changes to your subscription: http://www.postgresql.org/mailpref/pgsql-committers
