The diff is for release-11.sgml.

I fixed typos and grammar + rephrased some things that didn't seem to flow

The only major change is the section on PSQL_PAGER.

In the section on the new --create-slot option for pg_basebackup, it seems
like <option>--slot</option> should include the =slotname part but I don't
know the DocBook markup for that (maybe <replaceable>?).

I did not build the documentation after making my changes so the patch
definitely needs to be sanity checked.

Thanks.

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