On 8/16/19 10:41 AM, Liudmila Mantrova wrote:
For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid
improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what
this is
about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or
not.
If we want to make these intros more concise, one of the easiest ways
to achieve this is to address the reader directly ("Readers looking
for xxx are encouraged to look" vs. smth like "For xxx, see").
This is true and my counter argument is that a call to action is more
likely to get the reader to do something.
JD
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